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干货丨雅思媒体/犯罪类写作思路分析及雅思名师亲笔例文分享

作者:北京布谷龙途国际教育科技有限公司 浏览: 发表时间:2020-11-24 18:00:00



今天布谷的写作担当侯老师,将为大家分享一篇亲自执笔的雅思大作文,也是10月份的真题作文,希望结合该类别作文的写作思路及老师的范文,能对烤鸭们提供一些帮助~


题目:

Some people think that the detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV has bad consequence, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有人认为在电视报纸上披露犯罪细节会引发不良后果,所以这类信息在媒体上应当受到严格限制。你在何种程度上同意或不同意该观点?


→ 题目类型:同意与否
→ 话题:媒体/犯罪
 
针对媒体类的写作,首先要选择文章是从正面或是负面去陈述,再根据立场观点罗列提纲,充实丰富每一条的内容,让文章整体是有逻辑且思路清晰的。
 

◆ 媒体的正面影响:
1.丰富生活,提供各种各样的信息;
2.丰富我们的知识;
3.提高我们对事物的洞察力/见解;
4.媒体关注社会问题,号召相关部门对此采取措施;
5.媒体能传播社会正能量。
 
◆ 媒体的负面影响:
1.对事件的倾向性报道会让人们对社会产生错误的理解;
2.可能改变我们的社会观念、生活方式和文化意识;
3.有时候由于政治或商业的原因,媒体会报道一些不真实的信息;
4.媒体暴力影响人们的行为,是引起暴力犯罪的部分原因。

 


关于犯罪类写作,涉及到媒体上犯罪/暴力和血腥场面的细节,可以通过①会对人有负面的影响,特别是青少年,他们不成熟并且容易误导;②是否对具备分辨是非能力、在道德上会承担责任、不会追随罪犯行为的成年人产生负面影响;③如果他们在学校或父母的负责任的监督下,不会对他们产生负面影响;④不能有效地阻止或预防犯罪,因为在现实世界中有各种各样的诱惑等方面去进行分析。


提纲:

【不良后果】

1. 不良情绪,引发普通人恐慌、另外愤怒民意操纵审判;

2. 细节指导,模仿犯罪;

3. 受害者隐私和痛苦再现。


正文:

Since the news coverage increasingly focuses on the dark side of the society, it is undeniable that there are more crime scenes broadcast on TV and radio. Whether the media have to report every detail of crimes has been a controversial issue. Some people consider this trend a development of the media. Nevertheless, I believe it poses threats to adolescent growth.


In the first place, given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage, it is imperative that we discourage such coverage. The principal purpose of reporters covering criminal acts is to boost newspaper circulations or television ratings. Consequently, much detailed crime coverage is biased or exaggerated. It only serves to leave a multitude of citizens constantly fearful about crime.


In the second place, detailed reports of crimes by the press afford the potential criminals very useful learning materials. Reporting crimes in graphic details helps those who are in the process of planning some criminal act to perfect their plans. Drawing on the well-documented crime stories in the media, would-be criminals learn how to avoid the mistakes in their crime, which may aggravate the already soaring crime rate.


In the third place, detailed reports of heinous(wicked)crimes may traumatize the victims of the reported crimes. The reporters rarely consult the victim before they describe details of horrific crimes to the public. Hence, such reports become nothing more than an attempt to satisfy the curiosity of some individuals. Without the victims’ consent, graphic accounts of crimes may become nightmares to them.


In summary, detailed crime coverage in the media undermines our lives in several ways. I firmly believe if such reports continue to go uncontrolled, it will exert even more baneful(destructive/deadly) influence on individuals, communities and societies.


写作的最难之处在于提纲的构建,要清楚自己对于题目有怎样的看法,怎样去阐述你的看法,有什么样的论据去印证看法。有了清晰的写作框架后,就是将平时积累的词汇句子用适合的方式展开罗列。掌握了应对写作题目的精髓,相信协作对大家而言,就是小菜一碟啦~



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